Thursday, April 16, 2009

Super comma splice

http://leedrurydecesarescasting-roomcouch.blogspot.com/2009/04/never-hesitate-to-ask-rhodes-scholar.html

>Your fellow Plant City denizen the greedy Dr. Earl the Pearl Lennard began this bonus gimmick, The equally greedy Ms. Elia continues it with board approval. <

The march to the swamps of illiteracy continues.

>Board Member Falliera has distinguished herself by initiating an affair with Marc Hart, former head of Community Affairs, causing him to divorce his wife, leaving his two little children in bad psychological and financial straits. The administration forced him to resign to save Ms. Falliera's "reputation." He brought the divorce depositions at his own initiative to my home in Madeira Beach, so I know the whole seamy tale. After this saga, the board appointmed Ms. Falliera chair.<

Stupid. Thrice.

>The newspaper reporting on the schools is too flaccid to give them any concern.<

No possessive for a change? I've taught you well, haven't I?

The sisterhood of Gaia, Dike, and Themis are watching.

"Sisterhood" is singular, sister.



Ziggy said...
Also notice that she said "Etheridge" instead of Edgecomb. This error along with "Falliera" (which are becoming more and more common) leads me to suspect that Lee is on the slow road to senility.
April 16, 2009 9:53 AM


Anonymous said...
Note the ever present name transition that vinegartits is such a propensity for. Tom Gonzalez is the guys proper name

From Lee's blog:Tom Gonzalez, ever prepared to cover illegal behavior of board members with faux-legal gloss, said later that my speaking someone's name might "violate the person's privacy." Tom Gallagher cares about as much about violating a person's privacy as he cares about the scandal of his holding the lawyer perch for 37 years, which his firm got on a good ol' boy handshake.
April 29, 2009 2:59 PM

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Also notice that she said "Etheridge" instead of Edgecomb. This error along with "Falliera" (which are becoming more and more common) leads me to suspect that Lee is on the slow road to senility.

Anonymous said...

Note the ever present name transition that vinegartits is such a propensity for. Tom Gonzalez is the guys proper name

From Lee's blog:Tom Gonzalez, ever prepared to cover illegal behavior of board members with faux-legal gloss, said later that my speaking someone's name might "violate the person's privacy." Tom Gallagher cares about as much about violating a person's privacy as he cares about the scandal of his holding the lawyer perch for 37 years, which his firm got on a good ol' boy handshake.