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>His bosses, Jack Davis and James Hamilton, would write him that his data were incomplete or that they had not received it, and that he had to re-investigate the situation.<
were - plural
it - singular
Vinegartits - illiterate
Illiterate too strong a word? The comma after "it" splits a compound object. Make your own decision.
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