http://leedrurydecesarescasting-roomcouch.blogspot.com/2008/12/merry-christmas-to-all.html
>A normal citizen must label such tax-paid junketing as insane abuse of the tax monies that the public pays and thinks they go to the schools and the students.<
This is poorly worded. Who is "they"? Let's remove "pays".
... the tax monies that the public thinks they go to the schools ...
A pronoun and a relative pronoun is a bit excessive.
... the tax monies that the public thinks go to schools.
>I just received a message calling me a “lying bitch.” We must be doing something right. lee <
No. Just lying.
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Don't worry, I don't mind the link. I was actually thinking of doing the same thing with your blog. You take care of the grammar; I'll take of the issues. This way, we're covered on all bases.
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