Saturday, May 24, 2008

http://leedrurydecesarescasting-roomcouch.blogspot.com/2008/05/mr-linda-kipley-gets-job-unfairly.html

>She is also entitled to file charges under the American disabilities act.<

Capitalise the name of the act.


>I was able to examine four of the remaining candidates’ application for the job. <

The candidates submitted one application?

>It took a jury to rule that the board ignored Mr. Erwin’s warnings about theft, bid rigging, and shoddy construction of schools that the board and administration wanted to ignore and punish Mr. Erwin for pointing out.<

The board wanted to punish Mr. Erwin for pointing out his warnings? Idiot.

>He has little if any accounting experience (sales rep/accounting) doesn't sound like any deep accounting decorates his resume. <
This is nonsensical. Run on sentence or just crap?


>I have told Ms. Salem that if the board has turned her down for this job and picked the much-less-qualified husband of an administrator, <

Don't hyphenate the adverb in expressions like this.


>I look foreward to receiving these materials in a timely manner.<
[shudder]

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