Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Shoddy.

http://leedrurydecesarescasting-roomcouch.blogspot.com/2008/04/ms.html

>If Le Gonzalez Esquire does any of the following more serious infractions than the four listed above and turned down as too flimsy for punishment by the Florida Bar, expect to get another complaint if Mr Gonzalez descends to the following barbarisms:<

If Vinegartits writes poorly, she should expect a mouthful if Vinegartits writes poorly.

>listed above and turned down as too flimsy for punishment by the Florida Bar<
Flabby passive voice.

>Very, very respectfully yours<
Redundant adverb.

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